Comments on: Could any English Native speaker check this letter?

By: gxl

gxl — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 02:35:59 +0000

If its 500 word statement then its ok. Change the "I don't know anything" to "a lack of experience and knowledge of". It would be better,
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By: jackie m

jackie m — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 01:58:59 +0000

Too long and drawn out – 3 question. 1. do you do it, 2. how much, 3. can i be accepted. Personally if I got this the first thing I would think is if you have a degree why do you want to do modules, which in the uk are done at college and not university and are usually done by people who do not have the qualification for university. How are you going to fund your education in UK?
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By: mizty

mizty — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 01:31:59 +0000

‘all these traing were’ should be’ all this training was’

‘It’s then important a good command of both qualitative and quantitative research techniques. ‘ this sentence doesnt quite make sense to me im not sure what you are trying to saying

‘While my stays in developing countries ‘ try , ‘while staying in developing countries’

‘For all the above raisons,’ spelling! ‘for all the above reasons’

apart from that it seems good to me!!!

good luck!

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By: Adze

Adze — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 01:16:59 +0000

Hun,it reads like a book.Advise,condense it.UK
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By: twinkle

twinkle — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 01:07:59 +0000

when writing letters. never use numbers as in 1 2 3, always spell them out like one two three! good luck hun!
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By: James

James — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 00:18:59 +0000

Advise
dont bord the read
(Less words more meaning like key words)
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