Could any English Native speaker check this letter?

6 Responses

  1. James Says:

    Advise
    dont bord the read
    (Less words more meaning like key words)
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  2. twinkle Says:

    when writing letters. never use numbers as in 1 2 3, always spell them out like one two three! good luck hun!
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  3. Adze Says:

    Hun,it reads like a book.Advise,condense it.UK
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  4. mizty Says:

    ‘all these traing were’ should be’ all this training was’

    ‘It’s then important a good command of both qualitative and quantitative research techniques. ‘ this sentence doesnt quite make sense to me im not sure what you are trying to saying

    ‘While my stays in developing countries ‘ try , ‘while staying in developing countries’

    ‘For all the above raisons,’ spelling! ‘for all the above reasons’

    apart from that it seems good to me!!!

    good luck!

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  5. jackie m Says:

    Too long and drawn out – 3 question. 1. do you do it, 2. how much, 3. can i be accepted. Personally if I got this the first thing I would think is if you have a degree why do you want to do modules, which in the uk are done at college and not university and are usually done by people who do not have the qualification for university. How are you going to fund your education in UK?
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  6. gxl Says:

    If its 500 word statement then its ok.

    Change the "I don’t know anything" to "a lack of experience and knowledge of". It would be better,
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